Breaking Twilight - Chapter 2
Chapter Two
Bella
I was wrong, it was a Renesmee, not a Edward Jr. Edward had laid her on my chest, my beautiful baby. She was as hot as Jacob, maybe hotter, I felt like everything could have been good, like everything would make up the way I thought. I did not know how wrong I was. I felt a warm pain in my chest, and all the sudden Renesmee wasn't with me anymore. I wanted to scream; No! Give her to me, she's mine! I need her! But I couldn't, I had no power left in me. I floated in into a blackness so black I thought I was dead, but all the sudden I heard Jake scream ‘don't you dare to leave me, you promised!' I wanted to answer, ‘Of course I won't leave you, I promised.' That's the least I could do for him, to not let the blackness win. And Edward, how much haven't he done to me? I owe that to him too. I felt how hard it began to be to fight against the blackness; it felt like I bore the whole universe on me. I don't think I could bare this anymore. I would fail, like I always do in everything I do. I used my last strength and said; "Sorry." That was my last power, I could feel the blackness take over. I had failed, and the last thing I felt was an annoying pain in my heart. I'm so sorry Edward, I can't fight it anymore. That was the last thing I could think before the blackness took over.Kommentarer
Postat av: J
Wow det är riktigt bra de här grejerna! Har inte läst fanfic förut ;D
Postat av: Rebecka
okej då ska vi länka till din med :)
/Rebecka på Twilight-fans
Postat av: mikaela
fin blogg.)
Postat av: Sarah
Sv; haha okej, jag ska se den. Gillar skumma grejer x)
Postat av: absolutgossipgirl
Jag älskar fanfics och jag ska absolut rekomendera din fan fic på min blogg!!
Postat av: Lis
Bra text men om det var en pojke skulle han heta EJ, Edward Jacob, inte Edward Jr :)
Postat av: Bella
Sv; Hon kallade honom Edward Jr några gånger, så jag tyckte det passade bättre ;D
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